Adding 275 more words to any part of this draft. References are included but can add one or two more. It could be in the beginning, middle, or at the end. Building from what is already to strengthen the research paper related to Macroeconomics. These bullet points are extremely important: 1.) Application of Economic Theory - great use applying economic theory to the topic (explaining the economics in the issue), includes economically logical conclusions, predicting future economic trends, events or conclusions based on the reasoning used. 2.) Inclusion of Macroeconomics theories 3.) Need to narrow sub-sections. Add subheads for each section. 4.) Evidence of solid research effort drawing from many strong academic sources. 5.) Makes exemplary use of credible statistical evidence. 6.) The thesis is well developed and supported, feeds conclusion. Contradictory views plausibly handled. 7.) The organization is logical and easy to follow. Includes an introductory overview and supportable conclusion. 8.) APA Citations