Do you mean the response to your revised question which should be in your thesis statement) The Library database will be vital for accessing the sources for the research. Additionally, the research questions will be vital in directing the research process. The aim is to focus on the primary argument
to limit the research results. Therefore, keywords will be essential in the research process. (All good)
My research topic is about the government and the constitution, (Your research topic as stated above is the “drafting of the Constitution” which is quite different from what you stated here) I plan to use both primary and
secondary sources in the research to gain the necessary information. Good
Additionally, my research will involve peer-reviewed sources. Each source will be double-checked to meet this standard. Through the school’s library database, I will have access to all of the relevant sources needed for this
research. Accredited online databases are essential in accessing relevant sources for the study. (You mean sources considered academically acceptable because they have been reviewed by other historians)
My research topic is narrowed down and requires several sources to back up the ideas and points that support
the thesis. The primary source will be the constitution itself with other supporting secondary sources. (Good)
My research topic is narrowed down and requires several sources to back up the ideas and points that support
the thesis. The primary source will be the constitution itself with other supporting secondary sources. (Good)
Databases such as ProQuest, History, and Life among other verified databases.