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Can you please read the note, and just follow that. I have included 4 pages of my essay on reflections. just edited my essay base on the note.
You have a great subject, but you should be bringing in more detailed examples. Try to include detailed narratives/scenes to anchor your reflections. You should reflect on more specific events. How can you develop your thesis further? Take a look at those specific events. What unique reflections did they give you? What you have so far is a good overview, but try to go into specifics. Anchor each supporting idea with a detailed event, and really go into detail about how you felt at the time. What is your perspective now? Has anything changed? Do that for each supporting idea/example. Go through all of those reflections. What do you want to say overall? Allow some time to proofread the essay as well. Does that help? Let me know