Misdiagnosis of ADHD
Order Description
the requirement are 6 pages of body using everything we worked on last week
Instructions for the Body/Discussion section of the Researched Argument
The Body/Discussion’s main purpose is to establish the academic conversation that already exists
regarding your topic. The Body/Discussion presents the current state of the research and
developments regarding your topic. The goal of this section is to establish your credibility as a
researcher and to provide your reader with the context through which to understand your particular
argument. The argument will be developed in the Body/Discussion section through research and your
ability to tie it together, so you must:
1. Present an adequate overview of issues related to the credible claim (identified in the
Introduction) and focus on at least three major issues found in the research.
a. If you do three issues, you are following the model of the five-paragraph essay, but on a larger
scope. Three may be the number that you choose, but remember that you may choose four or five
issues, depending on the complexity of your credible claim/argument.
2. Answer the question: “Which questions are scholars and professional asking? How are they going
about their research?”
a. Remember to keep this focused on your topic, as specificity is strength.
i. In the section, if you are making general statements that are unsupported by evidence, you are
not convincing the audience.
ii. Your evidence must be compelling.
3. Write seven-eight pages, correctly documented, and free of unsubstantiated personal opinion.
(This task will be split over two weeks.)
a. Give the reader an objective account of the current state of research as it relates to the
topic.
b. Show connections between researchers, scholars, and writers.
c. Explore and report on the similarities and differences in the current research.
d. Comment on any “gaps” or “holes” in the current research, but not to the extent where you render
any of your future discussion on the topic worthless.
e. While there should be no “unsubstantiated” personal opinions, remember that you are using the
evidence from academic and professional sources to argue your opinion.
i. Tie the objective information from the researchers back to your argument.
ii. You do not want to do this overtly, but keep reminding your audience of where your argument is
headed.
iii. Do not present this as your opinion; present it as logic derived from the information in
academic and professional resources.
4. Have clear and logical organization.
a. Do not write a grocery list of information; rather, present researched information in a
carefully organized way.
i. Compare and contrast experts.
ii. Show how one expert has influenced another (i.e. offering a “pedigree” of the research).
b. When making connections between items discovered in the research, explain the significance of
those connections. Avoid a mere presentation of information found during the research process.
c. In a sense, you are telling a story: the story of the problem you are addressing. Group like
information together, but remember to tie everything together through transitions: make the
information connect.
d. You may break this section into headings by themed evidence. While you still want to transition
or connect the ideas/areas of research to show how they relate to teach other, you can also use
headings to break between sections. If you do make this choice, use Heading Level 2 in APA 6th ed.
(Level 1 is Body/Discussion, Conclusion, etc.)
5. Have paragraphs that begin with a topic sentence that supports the controlling idea of the
section.
a. These sentences will also serve as transitions, so remember to link the information for your
reader. Show the audience the logical connections you have made in the material and how all of the
academic and professional resources (your research) build to support your argument.
6. Have paragraphs that provide plenty of supporting evidence to support the topic sentence.
a. Be sure to evidence specific scholarly arguments with correct source use.
b. Avoid making general references to “studies” or “research”: your reader must be able to look at
your references or your evidence cannot be trusted.
c. All references to studies and research must be specific and be accompanied by a proper APA 6th
ed. in-text citation as well as an entry on the references page.
7. Use research that has been published within the last seven years or provide rationale for the
use of older research.
a. For example, if you are investigating a topic where you need to provide historical context or
historical contrast to current methods, you may have to use older sources to make your point.
b. One possible rationale for an older text is if it is a seminal/foundational text, and it is
still regarded as central in the field.
8. Contain properly integrated source information.
a. Paraphrased or summarized original thought must be documented with the author’s name and the
year of publication.
i. This is the best way to incorporate information from academic and professional sources as the
information (correctly cited) is in your voice, so it fits in with the rest of your writing.
b. Statistical information must be documented with the author’s name and the year of publication.
i. It is important to be able to understand information that is presented in tables and figures.
Quantitative and visual reasoning are both very important life skills.
c. Quoted sources must be integrated into the text through both a set-up and an explanation.
d. Quotes must also be documented with the name of the author, the year, and the page or paragraph
number.
9. Use less than 15% of direct quotations and should follow special formatting rules for quotations
over 40 words.
10. Avoid using any form of “you” unless it’s a part of someone else’s quote.
a. Avoid using “I” and “we” excessively. To avoid passive voice, an author sometimes has to use
first person. However, too much first person shows a lack of objectivity or the writer grounding
herself in the research rather than her own self.
11. Write in a style appropriate for academic and professional contexts:
a. Proofread for MUGs errors (mechanics, usage, and grammar)
b. Conventions observed (absence of contractions, no vague/general references, no redundant
remarks, and no slang, etc.)
c. APA, 6th ed.
12. Edited for conciseness, coherence and flow.
Helpful Tips as You Begin
Be sure to remember when it is best to use direct quotes versus paraphrases or summaries.
? Quote when you think the original language of a passage is more effective when left in its
original state or when you need the original language to make your point because the wording of the
passage impacts your argument.
? Do not quote selectively in order to change the meaning of a quote. Do not choose parts of the
source that support your argument when the majority of the source argues the opposite.
? Paraphrase when the information in the passage is important but when the language may be
difficult for your readers to understand. Paraphrasing will help remove unnecessary jargon.
? Summarize to present only key ideas expressed in a source. You summarize to present the overall
idea of a particular source in a compact/distilled form.
? Summarizing is different from paraphrasing in that a summary is about half the length of the
original while paraphrasing is about the same length of the original.
? Remember that the difference between paraphrase and summary mainly deals with the scope of what
is being used. As a rule, you summarize whole texts, and you paraphrase parts of texts (paragraphs,
sentences).
? Your role as the writer of the Researched Argument is to facilitate the presentation of the
current state of the research about your topic. Therefore, be careful not to use so many sources
that you are just writing a report: all of the academic and professional resources should be in
service of your argument.
? They should not comprise your argument.
we will continue to work on the body of the paper using all peer reviewed sources only
we can use the sources we had from last week if they are peer reviewed
i have resubmitted the outline below
According to (Center for Disease Control and Prevention, 2016), an estimated 11% of children
between 4-17 years have been diagnosed with ADHD. ADHD stands for attention deficit hyperactivity
disorder and is a behavior-related problem (Nordqvist, 2015). ADHD is a disorder that begins during
early age. ADHD is described by fidgety, restlessness, over activity, constant chattering,
interruptive, poor concentration, and inattention. Today, the condition has become among the
leading diagnosed disorders. This issue was first established in 2011 when UNCRC expressed deep
concerns in misdiagnosis of children with ADHD (Citizens Commision on Human Rights UK, 2011).
In their book, Diane and Rebecca (Diane M. Kennedy, 2011), takes us through fascinating
realizations about the interaction between special needs and abilities. They describe how gifted
kids exhibit attention deficit hyperactive disorder, without teachers or their parents
understanding their conditions. ADHD issue cannot be physically tested and thus no consistent means
of examination. According to (Steer, 2014), such diagnostic approach means that different
clinicians will approach the same problem differently. Another major problem is that ADHD can exist
together with other problems such as autism spectrum, giftedness, dyspraxia, language difficulty,
sleep disorders, and Asperger’s disorder. Thus, before any ADHD medication is given to
children,psychological experts or pediatricians should be consulted, rather than basing medication
on observations.
Discussion
Autism Spectrum
Facts/ statistics
The world constitutes around 1% of the population with the autism spectrum disorder. In the US, 1
out of 68 births suffers from autism spectrum disorder. The prevalence of the situation has
increased over the years to 119.4% since 2000(Autism Society, 2016).
Explanation
According to recent findings in Canada, US, and some European countries (Hannes Schwandt, 2015),
children who are enrolledin school at younger ages exhibit higher rates of autism spectrum compared
to their older peers. Due to young children’s relative immaturity, autism spectrum just as ADHD
goes misdiagnosed. Most of the diagnosis provided initially included giving children stimulants,
and which could not address the problem effectively. In her work, (Porter, 2015) claims that the
reason why the autismis misdiagnosed isthat it mirrors other medical conditions such as ADHD and
body giftedness, which makes administration of correct diagnosis difficult.
Emotional Disturbance
Facts/ statistics
According to the (Institute on Disability, 2014), 20% of adolescents in the US are diagnosed with
emotional disturbance related issues. Out of ten youths in the US, one experiences emotional
disturbance, which limits their daily activities, especially in school, homes, and even at
community settings.
Explanation
Emotional disorder presents itself with many issues, which are unique to each individual. Those
people diagnosed with the condition often responds to situations with inappropriate emotions or
behavior. Briefly, this kind of students often finds it difficult to maintain personal
relationships with the other students. Precisely, this disorder leads to manifestations of physical
symptoms such as difficulty in learning. The disorder is associated with schizophrenia. Often, the
condition lasted for a long time before it is detected and ascertained to be an emotional
disturbance. Emotional disturbance can be controlled by intruding in class assistive technologies
differentiated instructions.
Over-excitable
Facts/statistics
Approximately nine percent of the US’s citizens experience some form of depression (Iliades, 2016),
or over excitable characteristics. The condition is most prevalent between age bracket (18-24), and
adult students fall in this category.
Explanation
The over-excitable disorder is associated with the restlessness in the students or young learners.
In this case, children turn to be so active and noisy, presenting difficulties to their parents and
other learners. Children suffering from over-excitable do not follow instructions and do not sit
still. Sometimes this condition can yield to dangerous behavior such as scampering out in a busy
road. Moreover, many other reasons that make a child overactive exists. It is thus the role of the
parents to identify these reasons and consult a pediatrician.
Giftedness
Facts/Statistics
An estimated 2% of children born every year in the US exhibit giftedness disorder (Fractus
Learning, 2016). Some people believe that giftedness is attained through nurturing. However, an
irresistible agreement rests on the fact that giftedness is associated with birth, and thus is an
inherent trait.
Explanation
Many of the gifted children do not excel in their studies well. The trend presents when the
educational, cognitive, and behavioral needs of the child are not met. Most of the children with
giftedness condition go on their condition unidentified. These children with the disorder often
exhibit uneven skills, traits, and abilities. Gifted children end up failing to find emotionally
identical friends and thus turn to be so reserved to themselves. They often have the feeling they
don’t fit in a particular group. Many of the characteristics of giftedness are not identified on
time and results to psychological disorientation.
Opposing Viewpoints
(Paddock, 2010), in her findings argues that children could exhibit ADHD due to their immaturity,
trauma, or emotional disturbance. Giftedness, autism spectrum, emotional disturbance, and over
excitable can also be misjudged to ADHD. Their symptoms almost match those in ADHD such as frequent
attention switches, trouble in sitting still, and dashing and jumping around the room. The
conditions can result to children exhibiting signs of inattention. In this case, such children feel
unchallenged by class work and thus develop boredom. Most of this condition is confused to ADHD and
leads to misdiagnosis and wrong medication advised for ADHD while the child could not be suffering
from the condition.
In a recent Forbs report (2016), Walton provides us with insight about ADHD. According to the
research, 30% of children who have ADHD during childhood are at risk for mental issues during
adulthood such as depression, anxiety, antisocial characteristics, drug abuse, and suicidal
thoughts. This associationis, however, inadequate since previous findings have shown the difficulty
that exists in determining risks and rates of comorbidities on a long-term basis. Consequently,
other mental health issues such as autism spectrum, giftedness, violence at home, which leads to
trauma, stress, and depression, can instigate main complications of ADHD during childhood.
Conclusion
ADHD problem has been in existent for many years. What we need to ask ourselves is how the
situation can be intervened. We can begin by sorting out what is ADHD and what is not. In this
case, we assume that hyperactive spontaneous is the highly malignant kind. These children have the
most disruptive manners. Failure to address this on time accumulates to a disability. Other
children may look inattentive, with the cause being something different such as emotional
disturbance, autism spectrum, giftedness, and over-excitability. Anxiety imposes fear to children
so that they are worried, restless and preoccupied. But in reality, they are not hyperactive.
Separating causes of inattention in children should be the main issue requiring closer attention.
Thus, the diagnosis of ADHD should be carried out following consultations from pediatric
psychologists.