Homelesness
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i took a first run at this paper, but my proff pointed out specific points in which he wants added
to this paper. Im out of time!!:)
I will upload the paper,and my hope is that you can add the missing parts,using most of my original
work.your 5 pages along with my 7 pages will complete the paper. What follows is what i need added
to the paper, along with my proff comments.
"CULTURAL COMPETENCY: Recognizes cultural diversity within the context represented in the paper ?
Demonstrates awareness of her/his cultural worldview and is able to recognize the boundaries,
biases and blind spots of that particular cultural perspective.
Comments: Rating
This paper lacks much demonstration of cultural awareness, specifically how your cultural
background influenced your perspectives in doing this research. PC
FORMAT: demonstrates writing and research skills using APA style and citations
Comments: Rating
While the content of the paper is strong, the references lacked appropriate APA style. It also
seemed that the formatting that was used in writing the paper resulted in words being split in
weird ways between lines of type, which made the reading a little difficult at times. PC
CRITICAL THINKING: demonstrates skills in the assessment and analysis of the ideas of others and
the capacity to construct original ideas
Comments: Rating
This paper seemed to lack an appropriate level of critical thinking. It seemed like you were
basically writing as an advocate for better mental health treatment for the mentally ill and
homeless, rather than representing both sides of the conflict. PC
OVERALL
Comments: Rating
While I think the topic is one that is a conflict in our community, and it seemed like you gathered
significant data on the issue, it seemed to only represent one side of the issue, Gia. What are the
arguments and mental models that allow the situation to continue? You also did not include your
Self in this paper in terms of the importance of this issue for you and the impact on you of
writing the paper.
HERE IS THE ORIGINAL ASSIGNMENT
Counseling Theory I: Conflict Exploration Paper (2nd semester, Spring, 2016)
The purpose of this paper is threefold:
1 To develop greater awareness of a cultural or diversity issue that divides your local community
2 To practice research and critical thinking skills to deepen your comprehensive knowledge on an
issue of impact
3 To become aware of your relation to and personal investment in the issue, and how that influences
your understanding and ability to respond
This paper should be approximately 12 pages long, double-spaced, using one-inch margins and a 12-
point font, and should include:
? A thesis statement, including: the purpose of your paper, how you will go about establishing your
ideas, and the limitations of the paper (the ground you are unable to cover in a paper of this
size).
? References in APA format, including a reference page. Make sure you include page numbers when
referencing in the body of your paper. Refer to the Publication Manual of the American
Psychological Association for information about correct format; a copy of this manual is available
in the LIOS library. (Note: the exception we request to APA styling is that block quotes should be
single spaced.)
Part I: The Topic
In this section, describe, in detail, a conflict that is alive in your community. Provide the
history and an in-depth description of the current conflict. Include the different perspectives
contained in the conflict including issues of diversity. Illustrate your ideas using appropriate
references and quotations.
Part II: The Research
This assignment calls for qualitative research, which in contrast to purely statistical data, is in
the service of deepening the researcher?s knowledge on a topic through exploration and discovery.
You may include phenomenological research, which explores the lived experience of the other, and/or
heuristic research, which focuses on the researcher?s own experience. You will include your own
voice and your experience as part of the research text. Include support for your research from the
material addressed in curriculum.
? Describe your research process and approach. Keep in mind that this paper is about exploration,
and not about resolution.
? Include how the theory and practice of conflict exploration addressed in the curriculum and
readings informed your process.
Beyond traditional research sources you may also include articles, interviews, videos or
documentaries, attendance at meetings etc. as research technologies for deepening your knowledge
and experience of the topic of your choice (All must be accurately APA cited).
Part III: Meaning Making
? Describe your personal perspective on the conflict. What is your stance on this issue? How is
this stance influenced, informed, by your family of origin and your cultural experiences?
? Describe your experience of doing this assignment, including any somatic, intellectual, emotional
reactions you had in relationship to the issue and/or in doing the assignment. Did you find your
understanding of and position on the issue changing? If so, how and why?
? Reflect briefly on how the experience of exploring this material will impact your future clinical
work.