food crisis
food crisis
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with an ever growing global population, it is aticipated that the world will meet increasing challenges to feed it self, resulting in a so-called 'food crisis'. To
what extant do you believe that this potential global disaster can be addressed? outline the causes of the food crisis and identify the challenges it could present. in
your essay you should evaluate possible solutions to this issue, using examples to support your answer and making reference to relevant literature on the subject.
- make sure to only use reliable online websites as sources ( six is the minimum ).
- harvard style
- clear thesis statement.
IMPORTANT:
the writer should follow the marking criteria attached.
Comments:
You introduced yourself and the topic well, though your thesis statement did not have a stance; it is important that your thesis statement conveys an opinion.
There were no real citations on your slides, though there was one reference to the ‘Department of Environment, Food and Rural’; you needed to include the year of
publication in brackets here. Your slides were attractive in appearance but they needed to provide a bit more context to what you were talking about. What is the food
crisis and where is it happening? Is it going on now or is it something which we could face in the future? How is a food crisis measured?
You made good use of graphs which were well-explained (though again, you did need citations here). You used good body language and expressed yourself clearly
throughout, expanding well on your bullet points and examining both problems and solutions relating to the food crisis in a discursive manner. I was slightly confused
by your use of separate slides for ‘Management Strategies’ and ‘Possible Solutions’ – aren’t these essentially the same thing.
You dealt well with questions at the end and presented a slide with a reference list but these were not correctly formatted in alphabetical order. Also, bear in mind
that blogs are not reliable sources for academic presentations.