Feasibility of Valley Wide Electrical supply and installation industry.

Order Description Hello, I need to complete my major project for my MBA. I need to first submit a research project proposal to AIB. I had another company write this for me and it is of very poor quality, even after they re-wrote it twice AIB rejected it. Attached to this email is the proposal I sent in, their response detailing the improvements required and also the AIB guidelines on writing the proposal and writing the research paper. I would like to know if you can rewrite the existing proposal to cover off on the AIB improvements required? After this is approved from AIB then could you re-write the research paper that the other company wrote for me? It is also a poor standard. I need an Australian, American or English writer as papers that are translated from someone with a first language other than English require a lot of editing before being able to submit. I need the subject to still be 'An analysis of the feasibility of Valley Wide Electrical entering the solar electricity supply and installation industry.'