A danger of a single story, this is persuasive writing. The thesis statement has to arguably, controversial, specific and analytical all at the same time. My teacher likes simple writing, not too fancy vocabularies and don't make it too wordy. The file I have down there, I want a 6, or at least a 5.5. five hundred words would be great, a maximum of 550 words. I want to keep my little story in the essay ( can be changed), I need to write about the Disney movie Pocahontas, the last paragraph can be anything.