The following comments are based on last version uploaded on 22 November 2022 (Please use track changes facility in word for all new changes to be easily tracked in Word file.):
1)Pages numbering at the bottom of pages must be repaired as it's repeated starting from chapter Four.
2) The notes are still problematic, please erase the allusion to the year of the publication in the main text and only signalize the number to the note. For instance, when you quote Albertus and Menaldo (2018) eliminate the "(2018)" and so with the other notes.
3) Please add an explanation of the most recent developments from the summer 2021 in which the constitutional crises burst out ( mentioned it in a page numbered as "16" but it doesn't talk about what happened next and the reader would like to know more!)
4) In a page numbered as 59 it's said that Syria, Bahrain and Egypt constitutional systems have to recognize civil liberties. As explained in the case of Bahrain they do but they do not recognize such liberties with the proper structure of enforcement. So, please moderate that statement by saying that such a recognition is not properly effective.
5) There is a break in a page numbered as 17.
6)there is a need to unify all the formal issues.
7) In a page numbered as 32 it says, "territorial organization in Syria" but it's in fact about Egypt so please replace the word "Syria" to be "Egypt".
8) the introduction and the conclusions might be improved so please try to develop both.